I always smile,
the reason is you.
When you are away,
I always miss you.
Anything i think,
Is known by you.
whenever in need,
the need is you.
What great deed I've done,
so that i got you.
Precious thing i possess
that GEM is you.
Glittering in my heart,
that moon is you.
The only thing that i can say is
I LOVE YOU.
p.s. - This is my first poem and the reason why I started blogging.
19 stones hit me....wanna throw more??:
i don't have stones sorry! Just some beautiful flowers for such a beautiful poem..........will you like it? loved this poem thanks! very swwweeeeeeeet!
@ mohini :
:)
ya surely, how can I not accept those beautiful flowers.
thnk you very much for this visit and such valuable comment..
BTW how can u call our feelings as stones........?angry! but still no stone.....at all!
haha
stone resemble criticism
also i am always happy with the criticism...even positive side is, that person viewed my post with his feelings and even he thought to comment :)...
Then i may not comment again...coz i critisism is nice but stones.......kuch jyada hi hua...(btw ur blog is wonderful....instant response from u makng ur blog "comment chat" or stones- flowers chat!)
yeah
but i dont wanna loose a guide like you.
Need to learn a lot more from ppl like you, specially from IndiBlogger
okk i wil try to bring stones just for u...,,, may b ruby, diamond..... kidding.... precious thoughts are real stones
thats sweet of you :)
hey Arvind, very beautiful and natural....Keep writing...
@kranjini :
thnx :)
mast h yr.............
@ sunil:
thnx
like mohinis comments
nice and mushy
@magiceye : thnx dear
have u read the latest post??
good carry on
choo shweet
@w435rew: thanks for your humble support
@anon: yes indeed it is, this is the sweetest feeling :)
I will never have stones to hit at you, but i have one thing, its to say, i will hit one day..... :)
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