lines i wrote......feelings deep from heart






I always smile,
the reason is you.
When you are away,
I always miss you.

Anything i think,
Is known by you.
whenever in need,
the need is you.

What great deed I've done,
so that i got you.
Precious thing i possess
that GEM is you.

Glittering in my heart,
that moon is you.
The only thing that i can say is
I LOVE YOU. 



p.s. - This is my first poem and the reason why I started blogging.


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19 comments:

  1. MohiniDecember 27, 2010 at 11:35 AM

    i don't have stones sorry! Just some beautiful flowers for such a beautiful poem..........will you like it? loved this poem thanks! very swwweeeeeeeet!

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  2. Arvind MohanDecember 27, 2010 at 11:40 AM

    @ mohini :
    :)
    ya surely, how can I not accept those beautiful flowers.
    thnk you very much for this visit and such valuable comment..

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  3. MohiniDecember 27, 2010 at 11:49 AM

    BTW how can u call our feelings as stones........?angry! but still no stone.....at all!

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  4. Arvind MohanDecember 27, 2010 at 11:53 AM

    haha
    stone resemble criticism
    also i am always happy with the criticism...even positive side is, that person viewed my post with his feelings and even he thought to comment :)...

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  5. MohiniDecember 27, 2010 at 12:11 PM

    Then i may not comment again...coz i critisism is nice but stones.......kuch jyada hi hua...(btw ur blog is wonderful....instant response from u makng ur blog "comment chat" or stones- flowers chat!)

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  6. Arvind MohanDecember 27, 2010 at 12:14 PM

    yeah
    but i dont wanna loose a guide like you.
    Need to learn a lot more from ppl like you, specially from IndiBlogger

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  7. MohiniDecember 27, 2010 at 12:53 PM

    okk i wil try to bring stones just for u...,,, may b ruby, diamond..... kidding.... precious thoughts are real stones

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  8. Arvind MohanDecember 27, 2010 at 12:56 PM

    thats sweet of you :)

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  9. RanjDecember 28, 2010 at 11:32 AM

    hey Arvind, very beautiful and natural....Keep writing...

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  10. Arvind MohanDecember 28, 2010 at 11:43 AM

    @kranjini :
    thnx :)

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  11. sunilJanuary 14, 2011 at 10:38 PM

    mast h yr.............

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  12. Arvind MohanJanuary 15, 2011 at 2:50 PM

    @ sunil:
    thnx

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  13. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2011 at 11:55 AM

    like mohinis comments

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  14. magiceyeJune 14, 2011 at 6:25 PM

    nice and mushy

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  15. Arvind MohanJune 14, 2011 at 6:48 PM

    @magiceye : thnx dear
    have u read the latest post??

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  16. w435rewJune 16, 2011 at 1:07 PM

    good carry on

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  17. AnonymousDecember 2, 2011 at 8:03 PM

    choo shweet

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  18. Arvind MohanDecember 4, 2011 at 12:12 PM

    @w435rew: thanks for your humble support
    @anon: yes indeed it is, this is the sweetest feeling :)

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  19. UnknownNovember 10, 2012 at 4:41 AM

    I will never have stones to hit at you, but i have one thing, its to say, i will hit one day..... :)

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